Madan no Ou to Vanadis – Volume 14 – Chapter 3: Strife over the Capital – Part 4

For this part I changed the paragraphing, seeing how the descriptions are rather dense. I also adjusted the tenses and tried to make it generally flow smoother. Hope it has improved at least a bit. 🙂

 

Enjoy part 4/5~

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