Comments on: Chapter 43 – When It’s Over

By: Kami

Kami — Thu, 30 Aug 2018 03:50:00 +0000

This chapter illustration. Poor Kasha T_T
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By: Ohalehi Echezonachukwu

Ohalehi Echezonachukwu — Wed, 29 Aug 2018 01:57:00 +0000

In reply to Kami. lol was about to ask the same thing

By: Kami

Kami — Tue, 28 Aug 2018 04:14:00 +0000

Oh Midas, that is not madness but a brilliant idea.
Compared your world to ours, we have many countries in history who gone fallen and rise many times in the history of war shed in blood and tears. That experience enough created a beautiful world don’t you think so? XD

By: Kami

Kami — Tue, 28 Aug 2018 04:12:00 +0000

In reply to Darkness. the wrong with you with mind fuck XD

By: Damon Ransom #Swavey

Damon Ransom #Swavey — Thu, 14 Jun 2018 09:15:00 +0000

Ah what a shame to beauties lost their lives, it’s sad but shou;dn’t have opposed the realest

By: Izaya Zayoi

Izaya Zayoi — Mon, 21 Aug 2017 01:47:22 +0000

Their death was decided in the moment this story wouldn’t be harem… truly saddening, to just kill of all the loveable characters like that.
Friendship is harder to write then death, may also be a main factor.

By: Sage Hidden Bear

Sage Hidden Bear — Sun, 06 Aug 2017 03:49:38 +0000

This story has impressed me. Even the hot characters that had illustrations for them died in the end. I’m loving it. All I can say is that I’m a tad disappointed he didn’t jus go and take over the country.

By: Mclaindog

Mclaindog — Sun, 21 May 2017 08:47:40 +0000

In reply to Static Transit. With the death of these 2 girls this novel gained a hugeeeee buff compared to other shittty ln that would have these 2 pretty girls join the harem all hail the one love ship! Sink the harem ship! Also go origa ur the best girl!

By: kavinh

kavinh — Fri, 17 Mar 2017 23:44:20 +0000

its kinda bitter having her betray him like that and dying but she was honestly a pretty horrible person hearing her reasons, yes he’s a brutal murderer but she brushed off her and her friend’s life being saved and being treated well as just him throwing money if it wasn’t for him they’d both probably of been sold to some noble as sex toys.

She flatout ignored that he intentionally allowed them to take their revenge and that some of the people he’s been purging are just as bad if not worst human beings, including the soldiers that took advantage and led to them being turned into debt slaves in the first place.

Its one thing to just want to leave him after regaining her freedom it’s another to take that as an opportunity to try and kill her savior.

By: Vorth

Vorth — Sat, 10 Sep 2016 15:58:01 +0000

In reply to Darkness.

Same here, this is the only thing lacking in this novel. I wouldn’t torture them altough I would call the slave maker guy back from chapter 2-3, put the mark on slave on Kasha and Pajo and either make them my sexual servants or just throw them at my army so they can get fucked all day long.

I mean these girls fucked up royally, they didn’T deserve to die, they deserve to become meat toilets and to repent. I’m not a sexist that believe that women don’t deserve to die, I believe they are equal to men so they can get killed equally too but them being meat toilets would definitely be more interesting.