Comments on: Chapter 10 – If you don’t improve the public order

By: Tokanya

Tokanya — Thu, 03 Nov 2016 20:18:27 +0000

Wow, this chapter took me 2 months to finish reading it.

I don’t know … it’s hard to read?
I read a few lines every weeks and I had to stop.
It’s not bad but I can’t read more for some odd reason.

By: nckeo

nckeo — Tue, 01 Nov 2016 09:19:24 +0000

Near BL moment there?!

By: darkloki2

darkloki2 — Mon, 17 Oct 2016 19:23:45 +0000

thanks for the chapter!

By: popoyow

popoyow — Tue, 06 Sep 2016 09:36:21 +0000

Thanks for the chapter! =D

By: Shasu

Shasu — Sat, 03 Sep 2016 23:58:53 +0000

In reply to Giesss. I won't deny this. The author even uses archaic terms in Japanese, so yea, it's an old way of writing prose and it certainly has poetic touches. But then again, this makes it different to other web novels and I think it raises its overall writing quality in comparison to many of those "moe" novels. Though I will admit, that it gets close to my limits of English language knowledge to do justice to the authors descriptive language.

By: Giesss

Giesss — Sat, 03 Sep 2016 23:49:43 +0000

In reply to Giesss. The style is similar as those uses flowerly words and lots of figure of speech. It is near poetic.

By: Giesss

Giesss — Sat, 03 Sep 2016 23:38:10 +0000

In reply to Shasu. If you gonna compare , this is like reading centuries old novels which is fine by me.

By: Shasu

Shasu — Sat, 03 Sep 2016 22:44:41 +0000

In reply to Diukes. If there are any unclear sentences, I don't mind trying to explain. My English has certain limits though. xD

By: Diukes

Diukes — Sat, 03 Sep 2016 22:42:10 +0000

Confusing… but but not bad ;p

By: Foguinho

Foguinho — Sat, 03 Sep 2016 22:11:45 +0000

Thank you very much for the chapter